In the modern era, the advertisement significant role in human beings lives in the existing time. Despite, influence on the masses lives for purchase goods like clothes and shoes in the present time than past. This essay will put analyze the cause and present a few solutions to mitigate this issue in the upcoming paragraph.
Commencing with the most salient cause why advertising ill effect on purchase things. Owing to it manipulates people. It misguides masses regarding products and incites them to buy. Sometimes it shows a brand product when people buy it. It is the result that is unusable goods. Since not only shows the fake product, but also on ill effect on people. Moreover, nowadays young people more use of technology equipment as a mobile phone and television. However, it is excessive displays more advertisement owing to children pester their parents to buy. Ergo, the advertisement more time an excessive consumer product coming shows the bad result for human than the past year.
Furthermore, a possible solution to this problem by helping of government and individuals. The level of government, even though, the government ought to the individual aware about the benefit of the advertisement, yet, should be imposed to seminar campus in every society. The level of the individual, although the trend of mobile phone advertisement has more worthwhile, yet we can not ignore the awful effect of this trend. However, the more advertisement, the more opportunity, but people should check the details before purchase things. For instance, it is not irrefutable the advisement more beneficial for people. In addition to, they are introspecting in life and they easily buy various cloth and shoes sit at home.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, advertising does promote consumerism but
people could be educated about the ill effects of excessive consumerism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18566775244 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88824259241 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2182825244 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7894736842 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199020461658 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532664440933 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359133025343 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989042861722 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035076457688 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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