The age at which people have children has risen why is this so and what are problems will the families and countries will suffer
The age at which people have children has risen. Some people believe that because of this, the families and countries will suffer some problems. What is your opinion?
As compare to the past, it has been seen that the average age of women having their first child is of later age like 30s and 40s. Hence, some people opine that this kind of family planning leads to many threats for the families as well as the nation. This essay will discuss the reasons behind such lifestyle and impact of such decision on individuals and society as a whole.
To begin with, I feel women choose to pursue her career in her early age rather than starting a family or both things together because of low child care system and lack of maternity and paternity leaves in their countries specially in developing countries like India. Therefore, woman prefer to accomplish specific goals, get certain experience and want to be financially stable before having a child.
However, cimplications that a woman may faced in bearing a child at a layer age will be huge hindrance to create a healthy family. The most common among of them is infertility and miscarriage problems. At this age they are not only prone to many diseases like blood pressure, diabetes but also, they have less energy and do not involve fully in the children’s life. Hence, It will give birth to many problems like generation gap, anti social behavior and so on. Besides this, the proportion of youngsters will be less than the older population which directly impacts the progress of nation's growth. Government need technological adopted and creative people for the development.
In conclusion, there is need to initiate strategies at family and national level so that fertility rate can be protected and facilities should be aided so that it doesn’t impact the career of women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93569131833 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56419528219 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4114144096 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429389687208 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130180700955 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112881587373 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239574790473 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.169445008589 0.056905535591 298% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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