All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.Do you agree or disagree?

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them.

Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays battery-operated vehicles are substituting the vehicles operated using natural gas (gasoline). I agree with this new age change as it turns out the battery-operated cars are environment-friendly and they are also cost-effective in many ways.

Electric cars are very popular in use as they are eco-friendly and are not posing a lot of strain on nature. Electric cars avoid the combustion of gasoline by releasing a tremendous amount of harmful chemicals causing air pollution. Also, the requirement of transporting these natural gases to the gas stations just adds on to the air pollution by burning more fuel to help reach the destination for people's availability. In a recent survey by the University of Texas, it was observed that the amount of fuel burnt to transport gasoline from its reservoir to the gas station was adding up hugely to the air pollution as the usage by the people in their cars.

Another benefit of electric cars is that they are extremely pocket-friendly. The electronically operated cars run on lithium-ion batteries which are rechargeable at home or the mechanical center and the electricity required to refill these batteries can be produced using windmills, water mills or solar panels. This demand for electricity facilitates the growth of more power plant stations and in turn, becomes economic for the people. Moreover, the electric cars are low maintenance compared to the fuel operated ones and hence require less mechanical visits, saving money. A leading newspaper poll on the recent demand for electric cars suggested that a fuel run car requires an average of five visits a year to the mechanic for maintenance, whereas a battery-operated car might require just two visits annually.

To reiterate, the prohibition of fuel operated cars over electric cars is going to be of great benefit. The first reason is that they are environment safe and secondly, soon they are going to prove to be highly economical.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20189274448 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18876424604 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1988449406 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221925615193 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911840316462 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672997703405 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134994987302 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543064723363 0.056905535591 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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