All criminals should have access to education and rehabilitation programs while in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic?
Everyone has a right to get a quality education; however, when it comes to teach and prepare criminals to be a part of society, opinions can vary. Anyway, this essay absolutely agrees to impart knowledge to criminals in prison along with assistance to restore their status as a responsible citizen in the society. In the following paragraphs, this essay will argue how these rehab programs can effectively deter crime drastically.
Firstly, punishing criminals is not the only purpose of the penal system as it also comprises the idea of being fair to even wrongdoers. Even though they are behind the bars, fundamental rights cannot be taken away from them such as access to information or good education. Since most of the criminals will get released after their sentenced period, it is crucial to work on their rehabilitation in order to give them a second chance to improve their lives. To cite an example, Tihar Jail, one of the strictest jails in India, regularly host seminars to educate its prisoners for making them realize that they can still improve their conditions. Such initiatives have the potential to take crime out of the mind of the criminals.
Secondly, providing education would deter present prisoners to commit crimes in the future. The logic is simple, most the crimes happen for making money. If prisoners are given some formal training and knowledge to be a part of a nation’s workforce, they can work in a company once released. Clearly, as they can make money by working as a law-abiding citizen, the chances of committing a crime again is on the lower side. For instance, Frank Abaignail, the famous con-artist who did frauds of millions, was given training during his jail years and now he works for FBI to catch other criminals. Thus, the effectiveness of rehabilitation programs cannot be undermined; a criminal can turn out to be a responsible citizen indeed.
To conclude, justice should deter crime and should provide a second chance to the offenders to change their circumstances. Even criminals are humans that can turn into greater possibilities with the right guidance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... possibilities with the right guidance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05428571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83289856608 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1740649307 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135002726777 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444651608957 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328806399353 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847711770761 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020129615597 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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