All over the world, the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer. What problems does this cause? How can we overcome the problems of poverty?
The gap between the wealthy and the destitute is getting wider these days as the high-class people get wealthier while the low-class is suffering even more. This essay discusses the problems that might arise due to this ever widening gap between poor and rich and solutions that could be addressed to resolve the poverty problems.
The wide-range differences of social classes could cause a big problem for a country. When the elite classes get richer and the low-income get poorer, crime, inequality and violence rate increases significantly. This issue could be a threat to the country's stability, as there might be protests and riots. One of the examples is the French Revolution that was primarily caused by the social and economic discriminations. During the Revolution, the gap difference between the rich and the poor was large and it had caused the unstoppable riot. The gap is responsible to brings political instability and dissatisfaction among mass people.
The government could take numerous initiatives do to resolve the issue and alleviate poverty. Firstly, the government should make proper regulations in terms of business practice and create more job opportunities. Any monopoly and nepotism in important sectors should not be allowed. Secondly, the government must provide subsidies for the low-income people. The fund for these subsidies could be allocated from income taxes collected from the rich people and larger organisations. With the subsidies, it is hoped that the poor classes could improve their economic conditions.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that the majority of global resources are controlled by a fraction of the population and this could become a serious threat to the country. Creating more jobs and eliminating corruption could be effective measures to address the poverty problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42657342657 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97143556416 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555944055944 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6084138759 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140763600333 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042220849723 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498112737691 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878865396903 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407384750504 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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