Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree
In the present day, the internet has become easier to access, so reading news online that is very popular for everyone. But some people believe that reading newspapers are more crucial ever than source of news. In my view point, I tend to disagree with this statement.
First of all, the reason is that reading news on the internet is very convenient for people. Just having a smart phone or laptop or whatever devices connect with the internet, it is easy to read the news in anywhere and anytime because most of information is posted on the internet. Besides, reading news online is very rapidly, people do not need to go to the bookstore and buy a newpaper that waste their time. It is easily to find the news they want to read on the social network. So, the accessibility of the internet has become widespread and the new source of news to everyone.
Another reason is that reading news online less cause pollution for environment than using newspaper. For example, if demanding of reading newspaper increased, that would produce many papers by cutting trees, and utilize the amount of expense for ruining products made by papers. That is major factors destroy forest and environment. In addition, using newspapers do not save for a long time but using the internet to read news that it is quickly to find to read the news again.
To sum up, I would argue that newspaper will decline and more and more people will use the internet to access the news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, for example, in addition, first of all, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68093385214 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42272195561 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529182879377 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2501056634 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5384615385 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434615312111 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161031920253 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109555835582 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296460877386 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069606304581 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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