Animal rights have become a topic of discussion for individuals and government. How far is animal testing justifiable?
The matter of animal testing has become accentuated between government and people these days.This is one of the most debatable issues.This essay argues that to what extent animal testing is justified? I would have to support a limited amount of experiments should be done for the expansion of medical research.I will be discussed more points in upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, animals are sentient beings. so,they have feelings as humans.Although they can not speak,it does not mean that they would not be hurt.Also they have emotions as well as families. In addition,examinations on animals are against the moral compass,because animal killing is illegal.There are many alternative methods than this such as, embryonic cell research, stem cell research etcetera. Moreover, research can be done on individuals also who are in death-row.
On the other hand, animals are considered inferior to well-beings.They can be helpful in order to save human lives.For illustrate, Schizophrenia's successful medicine was tested on animals first.As went to BBC forum 65% of people are in favour of animal testing and they believe that experiments done under anaesthesia, so that they would not feel pain However, that can be mutilated their bodies and about 80% of treatment on animals actually has failed because distinct biologically and their bodies react differently than individuals. Besides this, animals are innocent as well.If keep using them for research, there will be no more animals to do so and lead to extinction of some species.
To conclude, we need to be the voice for the voiceless.So, animal experiments should be bounded.Alternative approaches can be promoted.Indispensable research should only be permitted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46816479401 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43790848418 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.393134737 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 162.222222222 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.8888888889 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269786742517 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117634370805 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683181240965 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171883441037 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796032520081 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.