Are women suitable to become police officers? Give your reasons and examples.
There are many occupations which have clear differences or favor, appropriateness in two genders, for instance, police officers. This job has a gender specificity which causes an argument that: Are women suitable to become police officers. From my point of view, I strongly believe that this job is not for women owing to the three reasons that I will point out in this essay.
To begin with, women's physical restriction is one of the obstacles in their work. Due to the differences between man and woman's body, women are usually biologically weaker, which often makes it hard for them in some jobs requiring physical strengths. Female police will meet some disadvantages when they execute their mission, for example, when they fight or chase after the crimes, suppress the negative rebellion, etc. Consequently, female police may be sometimes exhausted when they have to perform hard missions and may not do as good as male ones do.
In the second place, women usually lack some essential virtues in this work such as: assertive, decisive or strict etc. Women are often emotional, sensitive and a little bit too tolerant sometimes, which may be not really suitable with a police officer in some circumstances . Also, the working environment of police officers is often very harsh and struggling as they have to be exposed with many dangerous crimes, have to deal with many troubles and problems in a wise and quick way and suffer many pressures, which may be such hard work with women.
Last but not least, women also have to undergo many other difficulties such as social notions or family duties. More specifically, many families object to their daughters or their wives pursuing the career of a policewoman as they think this job is too struggling and hard with a woman. Besides, it’s often thought that being a police will take time of looking after children or doing domestic chores of a woman, which may have a certain influence on her family life. Also, when women get pregnant and have children, their strengths may decline and this may affect their job later.
In spite of these obstacles above, women still can pursue their passion and choose to be a police officer as women also have unwavering will and strength, physical improvement through practicing. However, I will keep my opinion that women shouldn’t be a police officer owing to the reasons above and moreover, there are many other occupations which are more suitable and appropriate with their characteristics and personalities. In conclusion, women shouldn’t be a police officer.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...en are often emotional, sensitive and a little bit too tolerant sometimes, which may be no...
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Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h a police officer in some circumstances . Also, the working environment of police...
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Line 4, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tain influence on her family life. Also, when women get pregnant and have childre...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, to begin with, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04481132075 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71638269544 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51179245283 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7220957205 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.823529412 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3529411765 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212431420991 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860658262685 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678055686671 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139553644686 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751889585272 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...en are often emotional, sensitive and a little bit too tolerant sometimes, which may be no...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h a police officer in some circumstances . Also, the working environment of police...
^^
Line 4, column 473, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tain influence on her family life. Also, when women get pregnant and have childre...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, to begin with, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04481132075 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71638269544 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.51179245283 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7220957205 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.823529412 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9411764706 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3529411765 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212431420991 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860658262685 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678055686671 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139553644686 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751889585272 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.