Superstars and athletic champions are always thought that have a stressless and convenient life in contrast with ordinary people. However, being a famous person bring responsibility and difficulty beside special benefits.
Every famous person has a public and a social life beside his/her personal and private life. Therefore, as a champion or film star they should respect all of their fans and be patient in confronting with them. However, sometimes, because of personal problems they cannot behave politely with people that unwillingly annoy the fans. Furthermore, in majority of times they have to apologize for bothering behaviors to avoid losing their popularity. Also, drinking a cup of coffee as an ordinary people, walking around, using public transport systems, shopping for daily usages and using variant public facilities are not easily possible for them, as crowd wants to meet their famous heroes.
Another issue that can make problems for them is their political orientations. On the other hand, their opinion about government policies can induce a huge number of people and get them into trouble by making some political movements. Therefore, the should be aware of the consequences of disclosing their opinions in media.
However, being a superstar or sportsman/woman brings fame in their life and increase their self-esteem and self-confidence. Furthermore, they become rich people that have a convenient lifestyle and grasp majority of facilities in order to have more easier life. Besides, healthy life far from psychological and mental disorders make them to be relaxed people and enjoy their life properly.
To sum up, being a famous person has both problems and benefits, but they are not mutually exclusive, and being a significant person may have stunning responsibility causing exciting life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...majority of facilities in order to have more easier life. Besides, healthy life far from ps...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, in contrast, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50709219858 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89248908972 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6406517426 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.928571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170735117631 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670366042674 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605211983856 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109968890229 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457378130465 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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