being a celebrity - such as famous film stars or sports personality- bring benefits as well as problems.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more problems or more benefits?
One of the most discussed topics of these days is about the benefits and drawbacks of being a popular figure in the society. Being a subject with its thematic importance, it has been a source for numerous serious discussions. Even though, being a celebrity bring some problem in ones life, the benefits enjoyed by the stars over weigh them; so I believe being a celebrity brings more benefits.
One side of the view suggests that a well known personality in various fields like film or sports faces different problems in their personal life. The main reason for this thought is, such personalities cannot enjoy their life with all the privacy that a common citizen could benefit. The life of film stars are always followed by media and their followers: which means the privacy in personal life is violate. Moreover, they are at threat of loosing their stardom at anytime, so they should be aware about each word and deed coming from them.
However, another side of the view disagrees with the above statement and suggests being a celebrity brings many benefits. Mainly because, celebrities are always focused by everyone, thereby, they are the centre of attraction in every place; which is a desire of every common people. Further, people around the world are looking into the lifestyle of these stars and they are always considered as trendsetters. Public is behind the celebrities and they compete to update themself with the costume as like of their favorite figure.
To conclude, evenif a celebrity faces certain issues in their personal life, such problems could be cleared using the power and resources they own. Hence, being a celebrity has more benefits when compared to the problems they face.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00701754386 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48338275435 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564912280702 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9434453288 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371512244821 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134252373351 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120653264366 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23913799902 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10000857708 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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