The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources in its young people.
How true do you think of it? What is the best way to invest resources?
In recent times, future preparations in some countries have been in the limelight and have aroused the wide concern. Some people are of the fervent conviction that supporting new citizens is the perfect way to prepare for the future. From my perspective, I partially agree with this idea.
There are several reasons why spending resources in new generations is proven to bring enormous merits for the country. First of all, improving the educational qualifications for the youths sets the pivotal platform for them to become more competitive in the labour market. Such result reduces not only the unemployment rates but also the crime rates, known as a consequent of unemployment. Secondly, people who grow up with opportunities for education are more capable of becoming successful people, contributing the sustainable development of the country. In Vietnam, for instance, the government has allocated huge budgets to provide favorable condition to the student. As a result, more and more people achive significant success in their major, such as professor Ngo Bao Chau.
Despite the above arguments, the government should also pay attention to other key fields. Spending money on tourist attracts numerous tourists, especially international travelers. Therefore, it is of paramount importance to the government in developing the economy. Moreover, healthcare system plays the essential role in preparing for the bright future; thus, improving the quality of health facilities is necessary. To take a concrete example, Vietnam government invest huge funds to improve health facilities in rural areas leading an improvement of quality of life of ethnic minorities.
In conclusion, while the notion of preparing for the next generations is the worthwhile in views of some people, I believe that investing in other key fields such as healthcare system and tourism is also necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48109965636 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03367339471 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2533650362 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212610798699 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582246158348 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496531493671 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116734441495 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380356765626 0.056905535591 67% => OK
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.