The best way to reduce traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger drivers and to lower the age limit for elderly ones.Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
In today's world, accidental death has increased and there are many causes for it.Some say it is better to increase the legal age for driving and to limit the age of older people.I disagree and will state my reasons in the following paragraphs.
Mortality, injuries and disabilities caused by traffic accidents are important challenges affecting community health.According to many traffic experts, the set of factors affecting the occurrence of a traffic accident can be attributed to three factors: human, car and infrastructure failures.In the human sector, factors such as driver distraction, passing a red light and unauthorized speed can be mentioned.One way to reduce road accidents is to impose heavy penalties on those who do not comply with traffic laws.Penalties can be deducted for driving privileges and fines, and even for revoking a driver's license.
On the other hand, the most important principle in driving is the education of driving culture among the general public so that it can move towards reducing accidents and enforcing laws and regulations in this field.Weakness in driver education is one of the major factors in urban and road accident statistics.In addition to the traffic department, other institutions such as education and the media can play a huge role in education. Driving people, educating people about proper driving culture and traffic in traffic areas.The media can educate people by making short films, animations and advertisements, by laws and regulations on driving skills, proper driving culture and traffic in traffic areas.However, in some cases, education has no effect on individuals.For example, we can point out violent people who have no control over their behavior and perform dangerous movements or elderly people who are unable to drive properly because of physical disabilities such as poor eyesight. They should be banned from driving or given special rules.
In conclusion,I believe it is true that some people should be banned from driving, but proper driving training and severe crime play an important role in reducing road accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43292682927 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04194355355 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 202.814912886 49.4020404114 411% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 297.0 106.682146367 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.6666666667 20.7667163134 263% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.6666666667 7.06120827912 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181446306842 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925774337588 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741005140664 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122586302861 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0752132891344 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.5 13.0946893788 241% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.21 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.1 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.84 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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