Nowadays, environmental issues have been increasing at an unprecedented rate. Although some feel that by increasing the fuel price this issue can be resolved, I, however, believe that other measures can also be taken to minimize this problem.
Firstly, using legislation global environmental problems can be reduced. Many industries throw their waste chemicals in the rivers, which leads to water pollution. The government could revisit their policies by shunning those industries that contaminate water and air quality. In addition, by giving tax relaxation to those industries which will use eco-friendly products and take care of the environment, authorities can limit the environmentally damaging materials.
Secondly, by using the formula of 3 R’s; reuse, reduce and recycle, this environmental problem can be resolved. At an individual level, rather than throwing products after a single use, by reusing it we can we reduce extra garbage collection which causes climate change. Café in Australia is an example of it, where any form of plastic is a ban, so they use paper glasses to serve coffee and other drinks to their customers.
However, despite the arguments above, an increase in the fuel price will curtail the carbon footprints up to an extent. Public transportation will be used as the transportation mode which will reduce the emission of carbon fumes. A good illustration of this is New Delhi, Capital of India, where the price of petrol is high than other states, so more than 50% of people either travel by public bus or metro. In short, the petrol price will restrict people to use their private vehicles.
In conclusion, in order to make the balance in ecology, we must not only increase the fuel prices but also encourage the government to create stringent rules against environment damagers.
- Some people say that all secondary and higher secondary school students should be taught how to manage money as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with this argument? 67
- Many people work from home using modern technology today Some people think that only the workers benefit from this and not employers To what extent do you agree or disagree 80
- Some say that advertisements of toys and snacks have a huge impact on children and their parents and therefore advertising to children should be banned Do you agree or disagree with the statement Give your own opinion 56
- Successful companies use advertisement to make more sales.What can make an advertisement very effective?Do you think this is a bad thing or a good thing for the society? 73
- Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.What problems does this cause?What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28424657534 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91108581512 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6310552787 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.214285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156561350165 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580008373068 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540366370321 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920114955836 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406394467431 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.