the old people is the basic part of society.there are the main unit and the important reasons for the progress of the next generation.they also provide their life and their money to the family. so we should respect them and give them what they want.
about pay responsibility, in my opinion, both of the government and the family responsible for the pay.To the family, this old person belongs to them and his help them entire his life.is not require at least to be grateful for this old man or old women ? is it too hard to spend a few amount of money in what he needs? on the other hand, the government also responsible for this old people.because this old person helps this country and served in many parts of life. like ministry, schools, farm, and other places.in addition to, that the old people don't need a big amount of money, they just need enough food and water for last day in their life.as they help us to grow up and learn us how to take responsibility, we should take responsibility and take care of them.
finally, we should listen to the wisdom they tell . and we should take care of them. this is a duty for all of society.
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,•describe the sit 73
- In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?Gi 56
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,•describe the sit 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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the old people is the basic part of society...
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...asic part of society.there are the main unit and the important reasons for the progr...
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...eir life and their money to the family. so we should respect them and give them wh...
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... and the family responsible for the pay.To the family, this old person belongs to ...
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Suggestion: required
...nd his help them entire his life.is not require at least to be grateful for this old ma...
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...rateful for this old man or old women ? is it too hard to spend a few amount of mo...
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...a few amount of money in what he needs? on the other hand, the government also res...
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...untry and served in many parts of life. like ministry, schools, farm, and other plac...
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...ces.in addition to, that the old people dont need a big amount of money, they just n...
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...esponsibility and take care of them. finally, we should listen to the wisdom they te...
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...we should listen to the wisdom they tell . and we should take care of them. this i...
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...tell . and we should take care of them. this is a duty for all of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, at least, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44761904762 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57830378532 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 96.3340381879 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343746092039 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141287746617 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906394502209 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218581012932 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079835266694 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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