Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the 4.0 era, it’s nearly possible to do everything on the Internet, including buying things. Internet does make shopping more easily for us than in the past so much, but like the two faces of the coin, everything has its advantages and disadvantages. With the proper use of us, I think the benefits of shopping online really outweigh its drawbacks.
On the one hand, shopping online means more risks and more chances of being cheated. In general, you can check if the product is fine or not by looking or holding it. However, shopping online experiences are nothing but looking at the photos, the information and nothing more. Without enough information, the ability that you will buy the wrong or bad things than the good ones when you go shopping outside is concernedly high. For example, when you go shopping in the mall, it is very easy for you to see if that dress goes with your not only body but also style. On the contrary, you may be persuaded to buy a dress that even your grandma dislikes when you decide to buy it from the web and reviews, which throws your money out of the window, literally.
On the other hand, shopping online saves for you not only your time but also your money, especially for transportation. For instance, instead of driving 1,000 kilometers or so to get to the nearest mall or supermarket in the hot, humid weather, all you have to do is sitting right in front of your laptop, clicking to buy your necessary things and that is all. Shopping online has tons of risks of being blackmailed, true, but if it is used properly, it can bring countless benefits. In addition, in the process of friendlier communicating with the consumers, there are always a number of sale off just in the web, or applications using QR codes. Besides, paying money is also faster than before buy using online credit cards. It is undoubted that all the best experiences are in the online part, so why wasting time going outside just to buy the same things?
In conclusion, despite the fact that shopping online has many risks, its conveniences and benefits really outweigh the bad results. Reading the reviews carefully, understanding all essential things involving consumers rights and you will find shopping online fantastic.
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- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 78
- Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 697, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...paying money is also faster than before buy using online credit cards. It is undoub...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, look, may, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in general, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78717948718 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63062552714 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3375034782 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.823529412 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1764705882 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22062906279 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740714364761 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049043864937 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13407883415 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428060832997 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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