Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.
How true do you think this statement is?
What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?
Traffic jams have become quite common and well-known in many cities around the world due to the emergence of automobile owners over the past 30 years. I strongly believe that more the cars will run on the road, more the chaos and congestion will be on the road. The government can demotivate people to use their cars by running odd and even policy or encourage people to take public transport in lieu of tax benefits.
Firstly, what our life would be without cars? No chaos, no sound of horn and no pollution on roads. Cars have become inevitably integral part of our economy and due to it's availability in all forms of sizes meant to meet needs for every section of the society, traffic jams are bound to happen. For example, in Toronto it takes about on an average 25 minutes to cross the red light signal which is actually less than one mile. Furthermore, it become completely difficult for a person to even walk on pedestrian because of no space left by motorcycles.
Government can restrict people to not use their cars by running an odd and even policy campaign. For instance, if it is 3rd day of the month, then only odd number cars will run on the road which left with limited options like car pooling etc. Secondly, government can roll out tax saving benefits for people which will encourage them to travel via public transport. This policy can be based on the minimum amount of money one person should spend to avail tax gains and on top of this, government would be successful in their efforts to reduce the number of cars on the road.
To conclude, I firmly believe that traffic congestion has increased due to the increased number of cars on the road but the government can decrease numbers by implementing odd and even policy and tax saving schemes to attract people to use public transport system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ber of cars on the road. To conclude, I firmly believe that traffic congestion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64086687307 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44270287653 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8916555903 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234511415771 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879187075878 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645366746595 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154384501822 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585370997251 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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