Childhood obesity is a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this and how can the problems be managed?
Obesity is the major concern that children of the current generations face. Some of the primary reasons for obesity are sedentary lifestyle and consumption of unhealthy foods. In this essay I will discuss in detail about the causes of childhood obesity and I will suggest some measures in which the problem can be addressed.
In this contemporary era, people are more addicted to a sedentary lifestyle as a result most children do not engage themselves in physical exertions and spend most of their spare time in watching television. Since they do not indulge in physical activities, and do not follow a regular sleep patterns, they are affected by chronic overweight. Moreover, as young people are addicted to fast foods which contain more fat and sugar contents, they are more prone to obesity. Soft drinks, for example, have more sugar content which when consumed could cause diabetes and other illness for the kids. This combination of sedentary lifestyle and a junk food dies is, indeed, a dangerous one.
Challenging though this problem of childhood obesity is, there is much that can be done to manage it. Apart from addressing the above stated issues, a government must educate its citizens about the ill effects of convenience foods. By doing so, they can ensure that people are conscious about the adverse effects of adulterated diets on their body. In addition to this, they must form regulatory bodies to conduct frequent audits on food companies to ensure the product contains at least minimum tolerance level of nutrient values. Similarly, it can reduce taxes on healthy vegetables and fruits, thereby encouraging its people to consume more.
In conclusion, due to indolent way of living and consumption of junk foods, children are becoming more obese and this can be certainly addressed by government by educating its citizens, auditing the food outlets and reducing the taxes on healthy diets.
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, so, apart from, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14423076923 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66209968578 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573717948718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7350871118 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.642857143 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208178715721 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775294012002 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114252268252 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140189252812 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789518937739 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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