children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families.
it is generally agreed today that children brought up in families with less money are better prepared for life than those from wealthy families. In my opinion, I complete disagree with this and I believed the good preparation for a good life or not, it depends not only on rich or poor families but also on many factors.
The first thing that needs to be said is the children grown up in wealthy families will have the best conditions to study and access with knowledge news, great preparation for the future. because better-off families manage their children with activity schedules, with registration for children in ballet classes, soccer and extracurricular programs. Often parents spend a lot of time reading to their children and worrying about the dense schedule. As a result, those the children have an earlier experience, accumulate more knowledge and become active, energetic. So, they have a solid foundation for the future to be better.
Whereas, the children have grown up in families with less money need to try twice as much and must stand on one's own feet. because all number of family must hard be working to earn a lot of money for the life and poor parents have less time and resources for their children. they may not prepare much when they go to school or work and this will lead to lower income for children later. I can see that the importance here is the environment and the methods of educating children. that is the reason to answer the question of why the children in a wealthy family can prepare for their future is better.
In conclusion, despite the condition of the family is important but the ability and effort to make a great outstanding contribution to their future. Personally, I think it is subject to the direction of each parent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, whereas, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77850162866 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61116724043 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514657980456 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7634467972 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.539373257498 0.244688304435 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182198404451 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204789807129 0.0667982634062 307% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321777512284 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.208750480041 0.056905535591 367% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.