According to the importance and special place of television in today’s society and the large amount of time that children spend watching television, the quality of education has decline and children are less knowledgeable. So, I agree with this statement that book is irreplaceable with television as a learning tool.
Firstly, when the time of watching television replaces the time that children spend reading books, acquisition of reading skills will be delayed and their verbal reasoning becomes weak. however, it may improve their auditory ability but the books help children to read, write and make better decision.
Secondly, television has limited access to academic resources. instead, books have more variety; reading them help children to develop their comprehension and imagination. so, they become more creative to producing new ideas, have superior intelligence compared to children who tend to watch television over reading books and also, their brains become always alert and they are able to cooperate more than children who only watch television programs.
On the other hand, children like watching visual programs on screen like animations, cartoons and entertaining shows because they are more absorbing than educational programs.
More over, television can be a detrimental to children’s health, it can cause eye problems and also it gradually becoming a habit that children prefer it rather than important things like reading books. so, it makes them lazy.
In conclusion, it is obviously mentioned that watching television harms children’s academic performance and children spend their time in front of the television unproductively. so, books are more essential way of learning rather than television.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67175572519 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90529978747 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56106870229 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.7528159058 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.833333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354363407223 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143602831893 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102244248412 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208585021056 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125921391379 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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