Nowadays, it is argued that children over fifteen years should be allowed to make decisions on their own. One decade ago, nobody could even think of that idea, but in 21st century questions like this one became important. To be honest, I would like to agree with this idea.
In the modern world, we live in, children grow up very fast. For example, at the age of six they already have basic skills of using a computer, so they can make decisions on their own when they are fifteen. Moreover, without parents' interference in youth, they will learn faster how to adjust to any circumstances and think fast. Kids will learn on their own mistakes and fails, so there is a great chance they could make a better life for themselves more easily and earlier. It will increase their confidence. Self- confident people are more likely to achieve success in life. One more important point to mention, they will easily make friends and co- operate more often because they grew up socially strong.
In my point of view, young generation is capable of making decisions. They grow up more reliant proffesionally without any interference. They are able to succed in their twentys because they grew up in circumstances, where you always ought to think of your actions and the results of them. Therefore, you should be a creative person. For instanse, my sister is only thirteen, but, right now, she is in another city, working as a model. She made this decision on her own and I just could not to disagree with her. We lose so much time listening to the directions of our parents. Definitely, they want us not to repeat their mistakes and try to make us follow ways they want. The world is changing every day. It is being changed by fearless people who make steps first and others will follow them. For that reason, I think that everyone should grow up as fast as it is possible. I, personally, regret about my decisions made in past. I wish I would not listen to my parents at that moments. Today, I could live somewhere abroad.
To sum up, allowing children to make their own decisions helps them to boost their self-confidence, understand of what the world is made, teach them to be responsible but that doesn't mean they should neglect their parents. At the end, everyone is happy when the right decisions are made bringing good results.
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise.Describe what action you will take. 70
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,-describe the situati 100
- Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise.Describe what action you will take. 56
- Many newspapers and magazines feature stories about the private lives of famous people We know what they eat where they buy their clothes and who they love We also often see pictures of them in private situations Is it appropriate for a magazine or newspa 76
- In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home withother old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimesthe government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?Give 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 924, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...sonally, regret about my decisions made in past. I wish I would not listen to my parent...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., teach them to be responsible but that doesnt mean they should neglect their parents....
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67639902676 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49663729184 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542579075426 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8165385814 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9230769231 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8076923077 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76923076923 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266834406251 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703351226719 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936992215313 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18903938299 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595060474652 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.