Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods? Which one is the best method?
In today's competent world, it is very essential for a company to launch or promote a product through an efficacious advertisement campaign. The advertisement become even more crucial when there are already established rivals for the similar product. With the advancement in technology, nowadays there are plethora of methods by which a manufacturer can advertise.
To embark on, one of the most successful way of advertisement is using television commercials to introduce a new product. In television commercials the contents of advertisement is very important, its effectiveness is further strengthened when a celebrity endorse that item. The reason of it is that, on television people can actually visually see the item and they also get to know its functionality. Secondly, promotion using flyers,pamphlets that are inserted in newspapers and billboards along the road sides are also very successful methods.
Apart from these methods, the advent of internet has opened new frontiers of advertisements through social networking sites and other online methods. Promotion through social websites like Facebook or Twitter is nowadays one the very popular technique for advertising. This is because, first of all the cost of advertisement on online platform is also very less as compared to video commercials shown on television. Secondly, as these websites has large user base therefore it is easy for companies to penetrate deep into the mass population and creating prospective customers.
To conclude, i would like to put my opinion that marketing through internet is newest and the most effective way. As it is cover large population.
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...t is newest and the most effective way. As it is cover large population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, apart from, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48818897638 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25226400442 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4887037132 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.074101901549 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0268805351062 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045199708462 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408395798654 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366440918205 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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