A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community .Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community .do you support or oppose the factory?
A industrial establishment advertise that it intend to establish a huge factory near my city, this is have many advantages and disadvantages.
One of strong point is the new factory will offer many job opportunities for my city people in different positions of factory sections, in my town there are seven percent people unemployment. The company says that the new factory will provide my town the good products with attractive prices, about eighty percent my community supplies come from outside through the near cities and the costs of transportation is high .Another advantages of this new project is the company will pay the taxes to the city government and this make the city ruler to solve town problems.
On the other hand, the new manufacturing production factory have some disadvantages .The first one is the new project has negative influence on the environment because it will raise air pollution and diseases will be increasing and the rivers will polluted. Another bad results of the factory is the noise and traffic jam will grow up because the new industry foundation has large number of cars.
However, I agree with building the new industrial project if the factory management will reduce the negative influences of this project and achieve the minimum of environmental requirements that can keep the atmosphere clean and quite
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a huge factory near my city, this is have many advantages and disadvantages. One...
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...duction factory have some disadvantages .The first one is the new project has ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1130.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89968650343 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8814289906 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.333333333 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.6666666667 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240315578058 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123024859318 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265316757743 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141987848421 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193381856574 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.1 13.0946893788 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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