Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
Comics, books, radio, television, film, theater
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
I’m my point of view, television and radio are, surely, among most effective media tools for spreading information, otherwise books are extremely useful to explains deeply the reasons behind it. However, these three medias have some disadvantages as well and we’re going to talk about it following.
Despite television being the most powerful media to reach people’s homes worldwide, it’s influence is dropping dramatically lasts years. Television doesn’t allow a good interaction with the audience. So, population is looking for been heard; and, mostly, is changing for social media, where they can comment and express their ideas. For instance, the greatest television channel in Brazil tried to prevent the election of the new president. All lasts campaigns were decided by them, however they couldn’t avoid his election this time. Surprisingly, social medias, where this guy was pretty active, reveal that people want to feel heard, and want another way to get information.
Radio is definitely stronger than expected. Specialists were saying that radio would lose his influence at all, when television appeared. However this didn’t happen and people, mostly in traffic, still using radio to have information. For example, in São Paulo, in some moments in a day, radio has more audience than television.
After all, I would say that, in these days, book is mos important way to sage information, specially after social media boom in last ten years. Understandably, information in Twitter or Facebook is not that trustable; and, because of that, book is becoming the most reliable source of information that we can find. This is happening because book has deeper information and real scientific facts in it.
Incredibly, information in a age of technology is significantly more trustable and reliable in book rather all other sources, then, in fact, I would argue that it is the most efficient way to learn.
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- some people think that universities should provide with konwledge and skills needed in the workplace .Others think taht the true function of a universityshould be to give access to knowladge for its own sake ,regardless of whether the course is usefull to 73
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- some people think that universities should provide with konwledge and skills needed in the workplace .Others think taht the true function of a universityshould be to give access to knowladge for its own sake ,regardless of whether the course is usefull to 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 139, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 10, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, still, then, well, after all, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43606557377 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91245737391 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632786885246 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6555517342 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160262825682 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523080682955 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442795969254 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886196945576 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544710879842 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.