Museums and historical places are one of the most visited sites by tourists every year as they depict the history and cultural heritage of a particular region. However, it has been noticed that such premises are generally visited by holidaymakers whereas the number of local visitors is very low. This essay will discuss the reason why it is happening and put forward a solution for this issue.
Two major factors are behind the declination of local visitors to such buildings. The first is the gradual change in the trend and mindset opted by the people, especially youngsters. In this contemporary world of modernization, individuals tend to spend their spare time with their friends and family by visiting public places like shopping malls, theaters, et cetera, because they consider them to be more entertaining whereas historical buildings to be monotonous. The second factor is the hectic schedule of all age groups. Whenever people get some free time, they prefer to pass it by sitting at their homes rather than going out anywhere, whereas the tourists already have a spare time to schedule their visits to these places. So, Museums and other history-related buildings are more famous among tourists than local folks.
Tackling this issue involves altering the mindset of public. This needs to happen via refurbishment of the buildings by government in order to enhance the interest of public in these. For example, government authorities should make these sites look attracting by carrying out necessary renovations like wall painting, establishing new sculptures, et cetera. Also, government should provide the facilities like discount on tickets or parking while entering these buildings. That is why; proper steps are needed to be taken by the authorities to broaden the number of visitors.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the reason as to why the number of local visitors is generally less than out-of-towner and suggested some possible solutions to overcome this issue. However, in my opinion, until efforts are made this trend will only escalate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, look, second, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79101273127 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1012048068 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293019280883 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777272199225 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522598808695 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163446740294 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667430218924 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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