Computers have made our world a better place to live in. DO you agree or disagree?
Amongst all discoveries, computers are an imperative part in our daily routine. The invention of computers has made a deep impact on our lives and the world would come to a standstill in its absences. I strongly agree that computers have irrefutable outweighing advantages than disadvantages which shall be discussed in the following essay.
To embark with, computers have not only been fruitful for our personal lives but also are extremely essential for professional use. Moreover, we can now do things more efficiently as well as with ease. For instance, programs like Microsoft excel can store a massive database even for later use and thus reducing the use of paper and stationery items by 85% approximately.
Furthermore, through the help of internet, computers have given whole world a global space for exchange. Additionally, it is not just limited to exchange of news or information but is the most inexpensive way to communicate via emails and video calls. To cite an example, the recent newspaper blog indicates a count of over 68% of world population who witnessed the launch of Chandrayaan -2.
Contrastingly, computers are sometimes truly called an idiot box. This is because it can be as easy as a game for tech-savvy youngster, however, it can prove a handful to learn how it operates and its functionality requires special training for elderly generation. To illustrate, government’s initiative of digitization in banks required professional trainings and as a result more than 56 percent of productive man hours were lost.
To conclude, computers and internet have come to stay. I firmly opine, the sooner we adopt this change, the better our lives will be in the future. Every profit-making decision involves a small investment and same is the case with computers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...re sometimes truly called an idiot box. this is because it can be as easy as a game ...
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Line 17, column 134, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...is change, the better our lives will be in future. Every profit-making decision involves ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24567474048 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1542558724 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660899653979 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8751583745 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235293122453 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075607919392 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711545969995 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124353911775 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.083305167226 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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