As computers translate quickly and accurately learning foreign languages is a waste of time To what extent do you agree or disagree

In moden era, computers have become paet of everyone's life, learning abroad toungs from computers is fast and better way although I partially agree with this statement.

To begin with, why one should get knowledge about other languges because it helps to build information about particular region. To explain this, people can easily know culture and history of that nation by capability of understanding their language. Moreover, if one is able to translate and speak many languages ​​then he or she might get high profile job in ministry. Put it more simply, the tourism depaerment always need few tsanslutes in order to translate different toungs in their territory language for ministers so that they can undoubtably understand and reply to other nation's minister. Further more, in some part of specific country government give money to learn language. In Quebec, For instance, regime pay 14 Canadian dollar to person provided that person learn French. This scheme is very useful for students, they get two benefits from it, one is they gain good command on French, other one is it plays as a Part-time job which provide enough money. Students do not need to job at any other places.

Nevertheless, learn different region languages from institution is lengthy process for Some individuals. To illustrates, When people take class to gain power for knowing other toungs, they face pronunciation problem, and it requires more time which is not convenient for few individuals. Besides, institution have high fee to provide lecture on various regional languages. Hence, Computers are time and cost effective option to speak and Understand other languages.

To recapitulate , computers prove useful device to translate foreign toungs speedy and clearly for people even though learn other region's languages are more beneficial.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21453287197 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63418403679 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 289.0 20.2975951904 1424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1507.0 106.682146367 1413% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 289.0 20.7667163134 1392% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 7.06120827912 1147% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170909815558 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170909815558 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12388388369 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300557084113 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 147.6 13.0946893788 1127% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -230.32 50.2224549098 -459% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 117.2 11.3001002004 1037% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.42 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 22.01 8.58950901804 256% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 117.6 10.1190380762 1162% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 118.0 10.7795591182 1095% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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