The evolution of technology and innovative ideas of various scientist have made consumer good more sophisticated. given that it has become an essential part of everyone’s life across the world. In my view, consumer good are certainly a boon to society, as it enables us to save lot of time and energy. This essay will discuss positive and negative aspects of consumer goods.
It is endeniable fact that household equipment such as washing machine, vacuum cleaner, fridge, etc have made our live easier and comfortable. The first and foremost advantage is that it helps us to reduce lot of time. For example washing clothes or cleaning the house is being now done by the above said machines. Eventually, we are now able to use above time to spend with family and reading books. Secondly, it also helps us to save energy reduce stress. For instance, in the present generation, our professional life occupies the majority of our time, as a result, pending household task many times creates troubles in our daily lives. The previous mentioned consumer goods act as a perfect solution in such situation.
It is true that due to over dependence on consumer goods, the amount of physical activity performed by people has extremely come down causing health issues such as obesity. For example, many household works are replaced by electronic devices. consequently, all work such as cleaning the home and washing is ignored by the people.
In conclusion, consumer goods plays an imperative role in human life’s and thus it has cause problems such as making people lazy and resulting to become obese. However it can be said that drawbacks are more hazardous than benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05035971223 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7392600032 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615107913669 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5792609442 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185712286491 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525507012391 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551087092486 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113799348195 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578896052863 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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