The bar chart shows information about the average temperature per month while the table illustrares the average sunny time in a year in 3 big cities, namely New York, London and Sydney.
Overall, there was a similar trend in changing of temperature in New York and London. Whereas, Sydney has showed an opposite trend to the others. However, in the table, the total annual hours of sunshine for new york and sydney experienced almost same while linden is minor.
The average temperature of New York and London increased gradually to hit a peak at around 29oC and 23oC respectively in July. Then it started to go down till the end of the year and stood at almost the original figure. In contrast, Sydney had the hottest period in January, which is over 25oC then slipped to approximately 15o C in the middle of July and then continued to to rose back to the original figure in the last month.
It is clear from the table that London has the shortest time of sunshine, which was only 1180 hours while New York and Sydney had much longer time of about 2535 hours and 2473 hours, which were more than double of that in comparison with London.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of temperature in New York and London. Whereas, Sydney has showed an opposite trend to...
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Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...n the middle of July and then continued to to rose back to the original figure in the...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the middle of July and then continued to to rose back to the original figure in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38173697732 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.268747131 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.875 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21248138715 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912167038336 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102157981488 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145891294659 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121228480927 0.0819641961636 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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