consumer goods have become the most important part of people's life.
Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantages.
In modern era, consumer durable have gained significant important in our lives. In my opinion, there are various benefits of this but drawbacks can not be overlooked.
To begin with, the primary advantage of using consumer goods in daily life is that it make our life comfortable and convenient. For instance, most families have both partners have to step out of home to earn and do not have enough energy at the end of day to prepare daily meal owing to long working hours. Home appliances such a microwave and dishwasher enable them to manage daily household chores quickly and easily. Hence, contributing positively in managing daily routine in families. Furthermore, the quest for consumer goods boots economy. The company needs to employ more manpower to meet the growing demand and there by increasing the work opportunities and a more advanced economy. Therefore, it helps in improving the standard of living for people.
On the other hand, people tend to become more materialistic, in other word they become workaholic. It will also bring additional tension and stress in their personal as well as professional life. Thereby affecting the wellbeing and mental status of the person. Besides this, an overuse of these technologies can have detrimental effects on lives. To illustrate this, interdependence on smart phone could cause damage to neural system to overexposure of blue light coming out of smart gadgets.
To conclude, consumer goods seems to be integral part of person’s everyday life. I believe that the consumer items have made human lives easier and, boost the economy, however, the downside is that it does bring health issues and wellbeing of individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21978021978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81774756221 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.3998663099 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266538009401 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666493835575 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725718229307 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134152110065 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373304245963 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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