Corruption is a vitals issue nowadays around the world mainly due to differences in the living of cost among the people. Corruption drastically increasing in various field by to earn more money and to stabilize social life.
In the past bribery did not practiced by people due to the positive reputation and their source of income basically earned by salary. Once individual's salary and expanse were not balancing that time most of the people were turning to earn extra money without effort. Corruption practice had started early 19th century in democratic countries and this system had travelled to all over the word quickly. Bribery had been influencing various sector of jobs for the past many years and government had not controlling for last many decades.
At present corruption spreads like a communicable disease among private and public sector employers, these people starts to collect money from their clients to achieve social status bench mark. People are giving huge amount of currency to offices for their job complication in time on the other hand Employers are taking money from customers to fulfilled their family or social requirement. Salary variation between private and government sector employee has played important factor in the bribery tradition in their organization, if any kind of work has to be performed. Corruption culture has been growing various sector like for the past many years for instance :- education, police municipality etc.
In the future government and private organization will control on corruption trend in their country and get positive result as well. Public awareness session will be conducting through out the country by social workers and new graduates to eradicate corruption culture. Each individuals will have gathered internationally to vanish bribery system from root. The corruption practice will have been disappearing from all the nations by coming 20 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, as to, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39202657807 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75721261309 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578073089701 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5021192402 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.928571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0833828430001 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307183916087 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276676391389 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543514130451 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181505068766 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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