The cost of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?
Now it becomes a trend to travel at different locations hence, the expenses of traveling other countries are going down and tourism has increased. So, in this essay, I will discuss
pros and cons of the above statement so that a feasible conclusion comes at the end.
With globalization, it becomes easier to travel from one place to another hence, mosses are traveling without any obstacles. Tourists plays a vital role in the development of the country. These are myriad of the reasons, to begin with, firstly, expediters admire to explore new places due to this they spend huge money to relish this hence, it results in boosting the economy of that particular country for instance, Dubai has maximum count of visitors so, they have strong economy because people come there and spend money in buying jewelry, visiting amusement parks and shopping malls.
In addition to this, when a person visits to another country indirectly they are cheering their culture and tradition with each other such as Indian prefers to eat spicy food whereas in Brazil they do not like to have chili in their food. Lastly, a country which has more tourist i'm explorers have more reputation in the world and they have separate identity.
On the other hand, it has been observed that countries with high tourist rate have high crime rate. Local people take advantage of voyager's and aggravate their visit by stealing and kidnapping them. Moreover, language barrier makes the situation more deteriorated, instead of helping them they misguide them. In spite of this, in some countries it has been found that visas are not given to those countries whose people are not well behaved, disciplined and tidy.
By concluding this, no Doubt tourism has increased and many countries are getting benefit from it in monetary terms but it also giving rise to Crime also.
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... terms but it also giving rise to Crime also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02912621359 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45712280472 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605177993528 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.094065598 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137729684636 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520992859813 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630596965045 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0770724400766 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656263159205 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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