Consumer appetite about the things that they need has gone beyond local and became global today.
This is to say, technological advances made it possible for people to purchase and utilize non-homegrown
things at their home place and make their culture or country indivisible to other's. In my opinion this is an optimistic establishment that 21st century is witnessing.
One benefit of having same taste for all essential and non essential needs for products such as clothing, gadgets,
food and so on, is that its accessibility to common people. Authentic Chinese food with same chinese flavour, for instance, one can eat without even visiting China. This type of development not only promote culture of one country but also open doors for employment with emigration. Furthermore, as per IIT's 2017 employment study revealed that 10 percent of total jobs offered in Indian hotels are given to foreign workers these days. Which is significant share for global workers willing to work in India.
Another advantage with similar international consumptional needs is that it is promoting global trade.
This is to say, global GDP has expanded exponentially in past two decades due to increasing exports from many of developing countries. This helped both developing and developed economies to earn money through import and export of goods. The USA for example, to rejuvenate Asian countries has stopped its cotton production and started its import from this continent. Consequently, with abundance cotton import, while, American farmers got chance to alter their crop with other crops those are in demand,
Asian farmers got higher value for their reaps.
Finally, with increased variety of product list customer has scaled up their position. Now major companies such as Coke are manufacturing their products based on global population. This eventually, increases business scalability in volatile situations, so does sustainibility in global market.
In conclusion, although, chinese products are snatching markets for Indian players in some cases, this is a positive trend considering end user in mind
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47706422018 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85313070413 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65749235474 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7088379434 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.352941176 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129122451219 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042450274527 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319510057801 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0485826952626 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300345233419 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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