Environmental issues are not the only problem countries around the world will be facing, but they will also be accompanied by education and population-related matters. Our country will face challenges in the manufacturing and energy sector apart from the above-mentioned issues. To overcome these upcoming travesties, we have to plan a robust process and change in government policies. This essay will discuss the problems in depth and suggest a possible solution.
With the help of cheap labour and infrastructure, China's manufacturing sector is growing by leaps and bounds. Bangladesh has the second position in the textile sector and it is growing by 10% each year. This is a big threat to the Indian manufacturing sector as it may not be able to compete with its neighbours. To exemplify, 30% of the multi-national corporations preferred to have a base in China as compared to India, as it has better infrastructure and logistical facilities. Additionally, the energy crises in India are ever-increasing, since the nuke deal with the United States contributes only 50% of the energy requirement of the country. A shortage of energy supply coupled with a deteriorating manufacturing sector are the two main challenges for the next 10 years.
To begin with, the government needs to form a planning committee to plan and strategize a 10 years plan, which will illustrate a robust model with all the policy changes required, to achieve our target of increased growth in these two sectors. Secondly, entrepreneurs need to be innovative in approach and find path-breaking ideas to solve the energy and manufacturing crisis. For instance, States can introduce tax holidays for companies involved in producing renewable sources of energy and also provide state of the art infrastructure like China.
In conclusion, many countries are facing difficulties in the areas of environment, education and population. Nevertheless, the energy and manufacturing industries are other areas of concern for the upcoming decade. However, this essay suggested that by encouraging businesses to innovate and the authorities to implement policy changes to support the cause only can we overcome the challenges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...able sources of energy and also provide state of the art infrastructure like China. In conclu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4110787172 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35398634282 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553935860058 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4950580642 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260383321187 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823163877883 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104318704493 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170530723859 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141741991872 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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