As countries become more developed, many fast food outlets move into the country giving local people greater access to fast food.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Recent decades have witnessed many fast food restaurant chains ha becoming popular in present day. Many people claim their benefits in term of a suitability for modern life, while others state their drawbacks regarding detrimental effects on health. In my opinion, the merits of fast food outweigh their shortcomings.
On the one hand, the advantage of fast food is convenient and suitable for modern lifestyle of young generation. Fast food is made from pre-cooked or pre-heated ingredients which have delicious taste, attractive aroma. Customers will be served on-site or by take-away packaging. This means that they might enjoy their meal while chatting or walking, which leads to more time for different activities in lieu of taking much time to prepare a meal. To illustrate the popularity of fast food is the increasing of the number of their stores rapidly whole the word such as KFC, McDonald’s or Subway…
On the other hand, the disadvantage of fast food is the detrimental effects on people’s health. This is because fast food, such as french fries, deep fried chicken or hamburger, is made from materials which the majority consists of being rich in carbohydrate, protein with low fiber. Moreover, fast food is less healthy than home-made meals as it contains higher amounts of salts, fats and additives. It is evidence that children who are likely to consume the most pizza and sausage leads to a slowing in development of certain processes in the brain. Therefore, the overconsumption of such type of food have a tendency to contribute to the increasing rate of obesity as well as to diseases.
In conclusion, the expansion of the chain of fast food brands might provide people with making modern life convenient, whereas their damage that results from the overconsumption of such type of food will effect on health. I believe that advantages will likely outweigh disadvantages in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13099041534 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85849486008 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7482643467 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295899751955 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10609367904 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649311884293 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189899178579 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169355610782 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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