As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
The issue of people using cars more and more has a prominent benefits for people, but it brings dramatic damages to the environment. While advantages concerns only some group of individuals, the disadvantages influencing the environment, hence all of the Earth population, bring inevitable consequences.
Private transport in cities is the perfect way for citizens to commute between destinations fast, while staying in a comfort zone. It is always preferable for some individuals to use their personal cars to drive to work and back, because it gives them a feeling of independence and comfort, rather when using alternative means of transport. For example, in Russia, public transport is very unpopular, because its conditions and services are very poor, so, a great deal of citizens would use private transport. So, by using private cars, people avoid discomfort and stress which is very common, while using public transport.
But, looking from a global perspective, personal comfort is not important at all, when pollution and waste disposal damage the Earth dramatically, consequently, each dweller of the planet. Considering the majority of people using fossil fuels in their cars, the oil industry produces huge amounts of waste and cars evaporate astonishing amounts of gases into the air which is one of the main reasons for the greenhouse effect. Hence, by using private transport people prefer their own comfort, ignoring the global impact, which is more crucial in global terms.
In conclusion, while the benefits of using private cars are a pleasant way of commuting from one point to another, this comfort costs a great deal in terms of environment safety. The pollution and oil industry waste impact on a whole population of a planet, hence brings more disadvantages for the environment, rather than advantages for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...sing cars more and more has a prominent benefits for people, but it brings dramatic dama...
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Line 1, column 245, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ages influencing the environment, hence all of the Earth population, bring inevitable cons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, hence, look, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33219178082 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89863426405 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.5318504541 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.545454545 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198353805665 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858651792274 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736583855989 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14007703596 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482611342192 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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