As Countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes
Why does this happen?
How does it affect society?
Many countries around the world have significant growth in their economy. Development of the country is contributed by lot of factors. One important factor which accounts to it is population. Let's discuss in this essay on how development of country contributes to family size and the effect in society.
Family were bigger in size during past generation. However, we can see nuclear family these days. It is because of the cost of living in developed nations. The cost of education, medical expenses and basic need is increased to ten times when compares to 20 years back. This makes people to really think whether they need more kids? Now a days, we see working parents in most of the case, therefore they tend to have small family.
Society is not greatly affected with smaller family in country like India and China, whereas countries like Canada have very low population. Canada is offering funding to child development since they have a lesser people. This helps people to have bigger family. Although, the funding is given still some people feel to have small family to have good attention. Society will not get directly impacted unless the population is really low.
To conclude, family size is not a dominating factor for enhancement of country. There are lot of factors which contribute to economy. Hence family size will not play a major role in advancment of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, so, still, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99137931034 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5536455953 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9833755018 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.3333333333 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8888888889 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281582810829 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796978365559 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653253700253 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159566230898 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676102550873 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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