In this globalisation and technology era, the whole world is considered to be a one big nation in terms of trade and job opportunities. Many people think that a country becomes more interesting and develops steeply when it's people includes mixture of nationalities. I completely agree with this statement.
To begin with, people living in a multicultural society can learn and understand lot of good things from other cultures. Firstly, they will learn how to accept each other when they live together in a community, because every nationalities has their own customs and traditions. Secondly, people living in this kind of environment will get a chance to explore different food habits and living patterns. Last but not the least, people belong to such diverse societies will be able to improve linguistic skills, being multilingual is a very good advantage.
Moreover, the nation will benefit from this diverse human resource, multinational companies always prefer a multicultural work force. It is helpful for the overall growth and success of the organisation, employees will get many ideas and strategies from their foreign peers. Furthermore, the standard of living of the people will also increases, mainly because of the fact that authorities will invest more on infrastructure development and basic amenities to attract more expats to live and work in their country.
In conclusion, we can always say that without any doubt diversity in population always helps a country a lot both in economical and social terms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...re such dining patterns and it can also creates some business opportunities in the regi...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'increase'
Suggestion: increase
...ndard of living of the people will also increases, mainly because of the fact that author...
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Line 5, column 354, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
... the people will also increases, mainly because of the fact that authorities will invest more on infrast...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2995951417 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99556841846 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607287449393 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.799694327 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158403562301 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626998745334 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113449611797 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10490361905 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959507742215 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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