Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
There is some learning exists that the level of law violation across the youngster is dramatically increasing. It could be reasoned by different factors, and also implying own type of solution.
Nowadays people face an extremely competitive environment. For example, it can be really hard to get an education, find a job, or pay for day-to-day life. All of these issues are especially relevant for 20-25-year-old people. Lack of sufficient education might result in a low culture which potentially could drive an increase in crime. Secondly, a good occupation is also a key driver of social worth. Though not all youngsters are able to get it right after graduating a college, institute, or university. As a result, they have to take any job, such as part-time, night one, or even dangerous. Such kind of work does not appear as reliable and to be paid enough. Finally, low income might influence overall life satisfaction which directly impacts the behavior of growing up the population.
There is no doubt, that all cases described above are truly important regarding the possible growth of crime in society. Some of them could be solved separately, but another altogether. For example, universities can be funded by government or private financial structures to lessen pressure for the student’s fee. Moreover, a schedule of the educational process probably might be more flexible to allow to work during studying for any who wishes to get some resources for day-to-day life. Perhaps a company should create a program of how to use the intellectual potential of young people in their projects. In the end, all these actions would be followed to really step change with crime coming from the youth.
In summary, it seems like a complex problem described above. Neither obvious reason nor simple decision exists. Although, many people and governments around the world are worrying about this. That is why this problem would be solved if all sites put their effort on the table
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, in summary, kind of, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09202453988 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84692985471 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647239263804 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.863407864 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0476190476 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5238095238 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61904761905 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179947815202 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466228439062 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428835189619 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102805660015 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034597860815 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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