The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve a crime.Do you agree or disagree?
Technology has benefited mankind in myriad disciplines such medical, communication, agriculture and so on on, where national and international security has been profited immensely with its introduction. A decline in the crime rates have been observed as compared to the past when use of technology was rare. In my opinion, technology can reduced physical crimes happening around the world, but not the cyber crimes.
One of the conspicuous reasons in the decline of such incidents is by virtue of an increase in the fear of committing crime among people. This is because various devices such as walkie-talkies, radios, pagers and many more have been invented by which the communication between police officials have become fast, easy and convenient. Having better message transmission among officials significantly reduces the response time between the incident happening and cops arrival on the spot to abduct criminals. For example, emergency numbers such as 100 in India and 911 in the USA are facilitated to report about an incident’s information immediately, so that the nearest police official can arrive at the spot in no time, thereby, magnifying the chances of capturing criminals. Observing and reading such incidents have thrilled people, and have refrained them from committing evils.
On the other hand, where it has controlled negatives, it has also given birth to a new problem, called cyber crime, which can sparingly be resolved by increasing security personnel due to a myriad of reasons. One evident reason is that such crimes are conducted offsite, and identifying the crime location is tedious and time-consuming. Moreover, online transactions happen at the speed of light, making it impossible for cops to reach the crime location before happening hence strengthening criminals to conduct a crime calmly. For example, if money is transmitted from one account to other, it will get transferred in a fraction of second which is way less than its trace and cops response time.
To recapitulate, although technology advancement can minimize and prevent physical crimes, yet it is not profound enough in resolving virtual incidents faster, and needs further advancement and research to control in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...ical, communication, agriculture and so on on, where national and international secur...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...her advancement and research to control in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, so, then, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1888.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42528735632 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0629649892 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.0022484702 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.230769231 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7692307692 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213691462647 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079734107796 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696325466736 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136241581758 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625097647551 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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