The cultures of many coutries around the world become more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative?
The cultures of multiple countries are becoming more and more alike, which may be claimed as a positive tendency. The causes for this phenomenon will be discussed in this essay.
As for the causes, one of the most significant factors contributing to the issue is, beyond doubt, migration. Nowadays, more and more people leave their motherland for very distant places. For instance, numerous students, aspiring to gain an education of high standard, enter universities abroad. Mingling with native counterparts, they inevitably share their outlook which, at first sight, might seem dissimilar or even somewhat appalling. But over time, even seeming peculiar stances on common things become a norm. Furthermore, widespread of Hollywood movies and the Internet are believed to be a great power to erase boundaries between different cultures. For instance, exposure to abundant advocacy of certain way of life, for example, coming from movies, might undermine the belief of righteousness of local customs, thereby drastically changing people's attitude towards their set of values.
Talking about an attitude toward the situation, the benefits appear to outweigh the negative aspects. A deeper understanding of foreign cultures seems to be able to unite people or even prevent conflicts. For example, people believing in different religions used to deem each other enemies which led to gruesome slaughters. Furthermore, as people tend to evolve, they glean only the best from foreign cultures.
All in all, I would claim that the phenomenon mostly is a positive trend in the contemporary world and globalization seems to be its primary contributor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, as for, even so, for example, for instance, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53149606299 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90472483634 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673228346457 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9866961437 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.357142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241007539615 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747470092094 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585434335725 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155431434797 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0759427616742 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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