In most civilized territories, green environments are being destructed for many purposes and it’s number has significantly increased around the globe.
To begin with, considerable amount of jungles have been demolished for many reasons. The main fact is that by cutting down the trees it would be possible to constructing distinguished roads and highways which leads to decreasing the traffics in gigantic cities. Moreover, construction companies ruin the forests in order to build stunning towns with many fascinating and modern appartments and houses. In addition, wood factories will be chopping the tree’s logs to create dazzling home decorations. Another fact is that slashing trees will be beneficial for many paper making companies which produce any kind of papers. For instance, forests in USA are been destroyed and vanished because of the recent roads and highways constructions.
Secondly, slaying green spaces would have many concequences for both human and also for the earth. The vital point is that it would vanish the green environment and could cause destruction of families’ picnic area. It also will have mighty impact on air which increase the level of air polution in crowded cities. Furthermore, razing the jungles would have dreadful effects on animals’ habitat and could cause the extinctions of various creatures. In fact, that would lead to increase the earth’s temprature and eventually commencing the global warming.
To recaptiulate, destruction of huge green environments will have great impact on every live creatures living on the earth and there would be no benefit for us to terminate such gorgeous places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in fact, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54296875 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00650083007 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6015625 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.136082305 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105418181473 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381901033946 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373229652955 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676639747416 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385859779715 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.