Nowadays, due to logging, destroying habitat, developing city accommodation and poaching, the lives of many animals have been threatened and some are even faced extinction danger. Since we are all part of an equation, with the loss of biodiversity, the natural world and life support systems are devastated, so the importance of animals’ preservation is more revealed. Despite many meetings and conferences that held annually, no tangible changes have made to improve world wild situation. Undoubtedly, without direct government intervention, trying to the protection of animals will not be possible.
Inasmuch as this world is not anything except action and reaction, even slightest our activity can impact on the whole world, therefore, what put in danger animals' existence, finally leads to disrupt ecosystem balance. Indeed, A balanced and biodiverse ecosystem is one in which each species plays a significant role and relies on the services provided by other species to survive. For instance, the hyenas are called nature mayors because they help clean up the natural environment and habitat of other animals by eating leftovers from other animals, carcasses, and so on. Another example of beneficial animals are boars who are called the gardener of nature since they help to spread the seeds of trees and turning the soil upside down. For these reasons, trying to the conservation of animals should be taken over.
Government intervention would be an effective way to mitigate this problem. Thus, the government can provide breeding centres and sanctuary to protect animals from the danger of a creature that is named human. Furthermore, they must enact laws that treat hunters seriously. For examples, a result of research indicates that breeding centres have a considerable impact on preventing the danger of extinction. Hence, to protect animals from dangerous, the government should interfere directly.
These days, human activities like the felling of the trees, illegal hunting, spreading urban area lead the ecosystem to the imbalance condition. While this disruption of nature threatens the life of humans, the set of actions that will be fulfilled by the state will help to alleviate this problem.
- These days internet is accessible to children easily Is this a positive or negative development 82
- Some people think that government should ban dangerous sports while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- some people think that Genetically modified GM crops are a positive development Others however argue that they are potentially dangerous Discuss both these views and give your opinion 84
- Some parents believe that learning mathematics at school is redundant and should not be taught while others believe that it should remain a foundational subject whether or not it is used later in life Discuss both sides 62
- Studies show that many criminals have a low of education For this reason people that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can ge a job when leave prison Do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4161849711 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83890363546 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0520532274 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245072288849 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721030488361 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496191400803 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133252412296 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587143528911 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.