Oil in other words "Liquid Gold" have been one of the increasingly availed resources of the century. Demand for oil and gas is tremendously overtaking other resources of the world due to the increased usage of automobiles and LPG. A major technological shift has been observed at the cusp of the 20th century. In fact Oil is one of the remarkable discovery in the advancement of the technological Era. Oil aids in plethora of day to day usages like in cooking, commuting, chemical industries, Fertilisers, Raw extract, wax, laying roads, pharmaceuticals etc.
Precisely, presence of oil is ubiquitous. In spite of having various advantages, extracting oil has various environmental impacts. Firstly, oil extraction releases many poisonous gas. Hydrogen sulphide being predominantly released into the atmosphere leads to nausea and breathing difficulties if serious precautions are not installed beforehand. Extracting fields offshore and onshore can sometimes be hazardous. For instance, the explosion at the "deep water Horizon" project by the British Petroleum took the toll of the Rig workers' lives. Hence, to touch the new sources for exploration will surely be detrimental to the lives of people around the extracting field despite the universal use of oil.
In order to maintain the balance between the nature and the demand in day to day usage, science and technology must be articulated in the right way such that Petrol and diesel cars can be replaced with Elon Musk's Tesla cars. Induction stoves, Instapot and other electrically run kitchen equipment can surpass the usage of the gas pipelines for cooking. SImilarly, there are many eco friendly options available for building highways like the newly invented plasticized roads.
To sum up, Oil demands cannot be equalized without digging the earth, but we can adopt various changes in our lifestyle to be eco friendly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun gas seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much poisonous gas', 'a good deal of poisonous gas'.
Suggestion: much poisonous gas; a good deal of poisonous gas
...pacts. Firstly, oil extraction releases many poisonous gas. Hydrogen sulphide being predominantly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, similarly, so, for instance, in fact, in other words, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1605.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38590604027 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07464783408 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640939597315 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8448044357 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.3125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15699440884 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531101339818 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483801739444 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884749459031 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306817506918 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.