In today's hectic lifestyle, in order to stay healthy, both physically and mentally, we need to stay away from daily chaos and indulge ourselves in must needed relaxation. Moreover, spending some time to oneself is not a sin, in other words, it heels the damages that have been caused by many external and internal factors.
It is so obvious that we have a plethora of options to chill out both physically and mentally. Firstly, it is often claimed that getting indulged in an activity, which is so close to our hearts, tend to produce more healing effects and positive vibes to a person. So people must spend some time in activities in which they are more interested in. For an instance, an IT professional, who is possessing greater affinity towards music, would find an out-of-world experience upon listening to their favourite tunes. Instantly, the mood will be uplifted, thereafter rejuvenation happens. Secondly, one can involve themselves in some of the most popular routines such as listening to music, reading books, writing blogs, meeting near and dear ones as well replenish the mental health. .As mentioned earlier, in order to stay healthy, both physical and mental health should go hand in hand. Staying healthy physically can be accomplished by doing exercises, in other words, getting engaged in physical activities prove to compliment the overall health of a person
Nowadays, most of the people ,knowingly or unknowingly, are leading a sedentary lifestyle, that almost requires no physical movements. In addition to that, the work nature that is existing now , demands more mental work than the physical one. Hence people often times are pushed to a saturation point, often cited as 'Brain drain' is on the verge of getting collapsed. There two factors totally deteriorate the overall health of the person. So relaxation comes as a helping hand, which erases the destruction has been caused by these factors. It is now an undeniable fact that due to these reasons, relaxation is not an option anymore but it is the most needed one, to keep them moving forward.
To conclude, it is no harm to take a regular break from the busy schedule and opt for the relaxation. This will definitely produce positive effects on our overall health and prevent us from becoming paranoid.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...re more interested in. For an instance, an IT professional, who is possessing greater...
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Line 2, column 389, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...or an instance, an IT professional, who is possessing greater affinity towards music, would f...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...es as well replenish the mental health. .As mentioned earlier, in order to stay h...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...s as well replenish the mental health. .As mentioned earlier, in order to stay hea...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f a person Nowadays, most of the people ,knowingly or unknowingly, are leading a ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...at, the work nature that is existing now , demands more mental work than the physi...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...more mental work than the physical one. Hence people often times are pushed to a satu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03157894737 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7171934233 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 602.1 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9116355068 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.470588235 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0799266780855 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025542897687 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291934915917 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417362575135 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214446992128 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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