Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
With the advent of technology, advancements in the space of automobile and transportation has grown tenfolds. Although these developments have improved the standards of safety, one can not see a drastic decline in the number of vehicle accidents. This essay will elaborate on the significant reasons of this issue and suggest few viable solutions to resolve this situation.
Automobile companies are investing a large part of their budgets in improving the ways they can protect the drivers, however, there are some major reasons why they are are not successful. The predominant one is that the individuals driving the vehicle are not following the traffic rules properly. A case in point is the study of the drivers in India, unless there is a traffic police inspecting the drivers, they prefer not to wear their seat belts. Another serious cause is the mobile phone usage while driving and this has been a major concern by the government for years. People nowadays are either talking on their phones or texting while on the wheel. This results in to not focusing on the road and they can end up running into other cars.
On the other hand, however, there are some possible ways, if incorporated, can help reduce this number. To start with government can come out with stronger punishments if the rules are not followed by the citizens. In mMumbai, for instance, the authorities tried this by increasing the amount charged for not following the traffic rules, there was a sudden decline in the number of offenders. Additionally, the government can also have tougher examination and evaluation before handing over the permit to drive their own vehicle. This will, moreover, encourage them to study the rules and regulations better to make sure they pass the test and get their license.
In conclusion, since there is a manual intervention when it comes to driving, there needs to be stronger focus on educating the drivers along with improving the safety standards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10736196319 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72617942802 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552147239264 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1445375985 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100101434487 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324071511335 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374943876976 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060709340899 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0158239628307 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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