Details of politicians private lives should not be published in newspaper To what extent do you agree or agree

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspaper. To what extent do you agree or agree?

It is argued that newspapers should not print personal things about political leaders. This essay agrees with the statement because every human being have a right to have their personal space and enjoy their life with their own family.

Every person has a private life which need not to be disturbed without their authorization. In other words, political leaders have family and other personal chores to look after. As a result, they get disturbed when media workers get around their government allotted house spying on them and their family. For example, last year Canadian president Mr. Justin Trudeau was sick and doctors recommended him to bed rest, but news reporters were outside his house were making false reports that he has got the COVID-19.

Politicians work really hard to run the country and the news reporters don’t give their personal space to enjoy with their family. That is to say political leaders have less time when they get free and enjoy with their families. Sometime media workers show up on their personal occasion, in order to get good gossips for their publish cations. For example, union leader of US army had a party at his home last month for his younger son birthday, but media reporters uncomforted everybody after showing up at the occasion.

To conclude, in brief reports of politicians should not be printed in the newspapers because it leads to distract their personal space with their family and make them uncomfortable enjoying their precious moments.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e reports that he has got the COVID-19. Politicians work really hard to run the ...
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...ybody after showing up at the occasion. To conclude, in brief reports of politic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, for example, in brief, as a result, in other words, that is to say

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4235698395 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.776764931 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0813133668292 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037435410125 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401057426062 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662841742284 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407420460891 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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