The development of tourism contributed to english becoming the most prominent language in the world . Some people think this will lead to english becoming the only language to be spoken globally .
What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world .
The tourism of enhancement led to english becoming a famous language across the globe . In some people opinion , that the english will become only one language in our world to speak with each other . Although english is good language to communicate , there are some linguistically disadvantages will be happens in some countries . This essay will give some advantages and disadvantages by the prospects .
To begin with advantages , if english language has become a world-wide language , linguistic problems will be reduced . Therefore every person can easily communicate with other religious . For example in the United States of America and UK have english language only for people to speak . Thus they can talk with others very simple . In addition to , since all subjects are in the same language , students can easily understand them . Then education system will be developed equally among all countries . For instance , in many countries students study all subject groups in only english , so they increase their study skills in all subjects .
Although there are some benefits by having one language on the earth , some countries will have disadvantages . A main drawback is national and regional languages will lost their source in their countries . To exemplify , India has one national language and various regional languages . If english language become nly language across the world , then those indian languages will loss their usage. An other disadvantage is , illiterate people , who are living in rural areas are may not able to learn english because english is literally depending on education .
In conclusion , the tourism of improvement is a main cause to become english language as an eminent language around the world . By this thing english will become the most usage language in our nations . By this thing , although we may get some advantages related to education and communication , we have to secure our mother languages .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33552631579 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83838080392 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480263157895 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2583297797 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3684210526 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 48.0 5.01903807615 956% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515597516542 0.244688304435 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18613200806 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116675899869 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369800381072 0.151304729494 244% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911201575552 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.