Discuss the importance of social media and freedom of speech. Why is social media important for freedom in society? Some people say that it is impossible to live without social media in this modern era of technology. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Social media has became the most important global platform that’s provide plenty of advantages for people who’s seeking for further speech freedom. Therefore, many individuals consider it as an essential technology in these days. In this essay, I will discuss the the importance of social media for people and the positive effects of it on individual’s surrounded community and I will also drop my opinion on it.
No doubt that the social media provides so many amazing facilities for their users. First of all, it considers as the main source of communication among people nowadays. In fact, lots of individuals are utilizing such a great innovation to connect with their beloved families or friends in same or even other countries. so, it helps people to communicate easily. Moreover, it also being the number one news sources for many individuals. Several well known news agencies publishing their news via such platform. Since they recognized the extremely and conspicuous individuals turnout.
Social media is paving the way for people to express their valuable comments. In other words, this platform gives the opportunities to whom would like to raize their voices and participate effectively in making various crucial decisions as well as criticize their government performance in case of having some low performances. such media channel also impacts positively in different life aspects such like education, transportation and health care system. As it allows people to highlight the poor services if found and escalate it to the general public and the authorized organizations through such platform. this eventually might contribute in accelerating the solutions.
In conclusion, I believe that social media is very significant and potent technology for most of people. As it participates in conveying our comments and criticisms which difinately impact on our society. also it allows us to be in touch with lots of people. And finally, it’s an great channel to exchange various news and expansion people’s knowledge about other societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, as well as, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47826086957 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04272395266 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599378881988 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8757652552 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8421052632 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262673848663 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746541182529 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090415167339 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163109407325 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857641754531 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.