The examinations are the most reliable method to assess pupils, some people believe, accomplishing superb exam is the main sign of a successful future. In this issue, I am striving to argue about advantages of hardworking in university, contributing factors for having a satisfactory life, based on my own experiences.
catching up good scores, intelligence schoolers achieve during their studies, shows their ability to learn. fast pace learners commonly are broad-minded who have aptitudes for that. so they can promote their intellectual skills better than others, deal with the unforeseen things easily and immerse themselves into a new situation. In addition, another important parameter about being successful in college examinations is studying that illustrate our responsibility. As per statistics, hard working always bring us benefits, meeting targets without trying is ridiculous. as a result, when someone put a lot of effort to be a success in the university, he/she would be able to beat other difficulties in the future. however, the fruitful graduation would not be able to open any doors in our coming career at the workplace. for instance: I have seen lots of white-collar employees, educated in prominent universities, they have not used theoretical knowledge in the industries. make an action plan, outstanding workers were made, needs turning our learning into practical strategies. so that, we should be considered about others factors such as adaptability, flexibility, and strength beside brilliant qualifications.
on the other side, I surely believe, satisfactory life has been made by the deeper concept and has different aspects. making profit decisions, chance, and other complicated factors sometimes, change our lives rather than attempts and talents. being happy has contributed by sophisticated things, sometimes successful people can not afford it. In the human's history, lots of prominent poets or scientists, have been suiciding because of depression, suffering from chronic diseases or actually not satisfied with their lives.
in conclusion, although having a rewarding career in school is an important factor, our forthcoming years are depended to that, but happy life has built on the various aspects. therefore, In my opinion, predicting or determining happiness is something unachievable.
- Your child is going on a trip to another country for 3 days. School is looking for some parents who can join the trip and you decided to apply for the same. You are interested in going with trip. Write a letter to the head of the school and include:•Why 78
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- Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot now not join him. You've found another friend who can go instead of you.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:Explain why you cannot go anymoreSay who can go instead o 73
- Do good exam results at school or college guarantee success in life? Discuss. Do you believe that studying hard will bring a better life? 89
- There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:• Describe what the problem with the changing rooms 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67806267806 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18364308852 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669515669516 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8086490059 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.722222222 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114928166706 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310959779133 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299260404617 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648879811091 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148486879553 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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