The usage of car is increasing with population. The usage of car's have increased recently when you compare with 20 years before. This gives the proof that cars usage will get increased due to increase in population and I believe in twenty years cars usage will be increasing than there are today.
Nowadays variety models of cars are easily available in market, the competition in the car marketing makes companies to release the cheapest cars and it helps to increase the car usage. By the survey held in Bangalore city, the count of cars has increased more than 50% in 2017 comparing with 2010 data. The financial services like bank, private firms and even card holders are providing loans on easy monthly installment with less interest rate that helps most of the people to buy the car easily with out looking for complete payment and has advantage to car marketing field. The companies are providing their employees with car lease program which can avail tax benefit on their salary. All the above benefits which helps to increase the car usage along with population increase.
However, in recent years, the usage of car increase the air pollution, sound pollution and hectic traffic jams especially in cities. Earlier days we prefer to walk more while commuting to school, offices or to daily work places which is replaced with car with less amount of time to commute and that affected the health causing obesity, overweight leads to heart disease.
To conclude, the usage of car is being increased day to day basis as per the survey held in recent times. So I believe the car usage will get increase with in twenty years and can reduce the demerits of car usage by introducing solar cars,hydro cars.
- Many companies invest their money in sport games for advertisement purposes Some people think it is good for the sport world while others believe that it has some disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 75
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years, there will be fewer cars are in use than there are today. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enty years cars usage will be increasing than there are today. Nowadays variet...
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...et, the competition in the car marketing makes companies to release the cheapest ...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...ment with less interest rate that helps most of people to buy the car easily with out looking ...
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Suggestion: without
...ps most of people to buy the car easily with out looking for complete payment and has ad...
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Suggestion: However,
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...t leads to heart disease. To conclude,the usage of car is being increased day to ...
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Suggestion: , hydro
...s of car usage by introducing solar cars,hydro cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87285223368 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41278229527 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3022984238 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234403611225 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105426547959 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416611754126 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154233519823 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441906080787 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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